Template talk:Did you know/Jim Eastwood

Jim Eastwood

 * ... that Jim Eastwood became known as Jedi Jim due to his abilities of persuasion on The Apprentice?
 * Reviewed: Holothuria forskali

Created by The C of E (talk). Self nom at 10:17, 29 July 2011 (UTC)


 * Age, sources, neutrality are OK. No copyvio or plagiarism, but I appear to have reduced the readable prose below the qualifying limit by copy editing it. Is there nothing else to add? Yomangani talk 12:44, 29 July 2011 (UTC)
 * I've expanded the prose now. The C of E. God Save The Queen! (talk) 13:23, 29 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg Length now OK. Possible ALT1: ... that Jim Eastwood became known as "Jedi Jim" because of his powers of persuasion on The Apprentice? "Powers" is better for a Jedi, and "because of" will get "due to/owing to" pedants off your back. Yomangani talk 00:12, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Agreed, Alt1 will be good. The C of E. God Save The Queen! (talk) 06:03, 30 July 2011 (UTC)