Template talk:Did you know/Kuda Lumping

Kuda Lumping

 * ... that Kuda Lumping (performance pictured) may represent male virility or female irrationality?
 * Reviewed: 1972 World Series of Poker

5x expanded by Crisco 1492 (talk). Self nom at 09:29, 31 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Pictogram voting keep.svg Length, date OK Hooks AGF Thelmadatter (talk) 18:47, 31 July 2011 (UTC)

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Hook
 * Length, format, content rules: Tony   (talk)  07:13, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Source: Tony   (talk)  07:13, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Interest: Only just ... Tony   (talk)  07:13, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Image suitability, if applicable: I'd crop it. Tony   (talk)  07:13, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Cropped. Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:22, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
 * ALT hooks, if proposed:
 * ALT2: ... that Flat Horse (performance pictured) may represent male virility or female irrationality?
 * ALT2 is for if we need a quirky. Crisco 1492 (talk) 03:02, 7 August 2011 (UTC)

Article
 * Length: Tony   (talk)  07:13, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Vintage: Tony   (talk)  07:13, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Sourcing (V, RS, BLP): Sources look authoritative, incl. Jakarta Globe. Tony   (talk)  07:13, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Neutrality: Tony   (talk)  07:13, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Plagiarism/close paraphrasing: Spot-check looks OK. Tony   (talk)  07:13, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Copyvio: Images yup. Tony   (talk)  07:13, 3 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting: I tagged it "overlinked". Can you please unlink "glass", "horsemen", "whipping", "bamboo", "busker", etc. – common dictionary terms. Space before ellipsis points. Pretty well-written. No chance of brightening the 1922 pic? Tony   (talk)  07:13, 3 August 2011 (UTC)

Comments/discussion:
 * ALT1: ... that in Kuda Lumping (performance pictured), performers may eat glass and fire?
 * I have addressed Tony's comments, although I left one instance of busker linked as it might not be understood, depending on the cultural context. Crisco 1492 (talk) 12:30, 3 August 2011 (UTC)