Template talk:Did you know/Open House (Breaking Bad)

Open House (Breaking Bad)

 * ... that the song "If I Had a Heart" by Fever Ray (pictured) was featured for the Breaking Bad episode "Open House" because it matched the "full, heavy darkness" of its scene?
 * Comment: Although listed as "expanded", it is essentially a new article because it was created from a redirect.

5x expanded by Hunter Kahn (talk). Self nom at 01:58, 6 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Please add a comment and signature (or just a signature if endorsing) after each aspect you have reviewed:

Hook
 * Length, format, content rules: Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Source: Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Interest: Not bad, could be better. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Image suitability, if applicable: Doesn't seem all that good at 100px, too out of focus and the colour is shot. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)

Article
 * Length: Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Vintage: Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Sourcing (V, RS, BLP): I think you should have a separate footnotes and bibliography section, since just having "Gilligan" isn't clear. Seem reliable enough. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Neutrality:
 * Plagiarism/close paraphrasing: None apparent. AGF on offline sources. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Copyvio: FUR is valid, other images are free. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting:

Comments/discussion:
 * Symbol question.svg Could you just clean up the references a bit? Everything else is okay. Crisco 1492 (talk) 07:28, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * I've added a separate bibliography section. This uses the template similar to previous FAs and GAs I've done, like Tender Mercies and The Incredible Melting Man. I think it addresses the concern you've raised but if it doesn't, let me know. —  Hun  ter   Ka  hn  16:05, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Changes to referencing checked and approved by me: Hassocks  5489 (tickets please!)  23:06, 13 August 2011 (UTC)