Template talk:Did you know/Pauline Ashwell

Pauline Ashwell

 * ... that while Pauline Ashwell was nominated for a Hugo Award for Best New Author in 1958, her first story was actually published in 1942 when she was only fourteen years old....?
 * Reviewed: pending

Created by Gamaliel (talk). Self nom at 02:41, 30 July 2011 (UTC) Please add a comment and signature (or just a signature if endorsing) after each aspect you have reviewed: Hook
 * Length, format, content rules: Symbol confirmed.svg Fine, although you probably don't need the final ellipsis prior to the question mark. Canadian   Paul  19:47, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Source: Pictogram voting keep.svg Offline reference accepted in good faith. Canadian   Paul  19:47, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Interest: Symbol confirmed.svg Canadian   Paul  19:47, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Image suitability, if applicable: N/A
 * ALT hooks, if proposed: N/A Gamaliel, you might consider this ... unsure, do you prefer the flow here?: ALT1 ... that Pauline Ashwell – who was nominated for a Hugo Award for Best New Author in 1958 – published her first story in 1942 when she was only 14....? Tony   (talk)  03:47, 31 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Sounds good to me, I'm open to either hook. Gamaliel (talk) 04:27, 31 July 2011 (UTC)

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 * Length: Symbol confirmed.svg Canadian   Paul  19:47, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Vintage: Symbol confirmed.svg Canadian   Paul  19:47, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Sourcing (V, RS, BLP): Symbol confirmed.svg Canadian   Paul  19:47, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Neutrality: Symbol confirmed.svg I removed one POV word, seems fine now. Canadian   Paul  19:47, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Plagiarism/close paraphrasing: Pictogram voting keep.svg Offline reference accepted in good faith. Canadian   Paul  19:47, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Copyvio: Pictogram voting keep.svg Offline reference accepted in good faith. Canadian   Paul  19:47, 30 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Obvious faults in prose, structure, formatting: Prose is a little choppy, but I don't think that disqualifies for DYK.
 * I agree, it was difficult to negotiate her frequent swapping of pseudonyms and still maintain the chronological flow. Gamaliel (talk) 04:27, 31 July 2011 (UTC)

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