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Shinde Chhatri

 * ... that you cannot open your umbrella when inside Shinde Chhatri, a memorial to Mahadji Shinde, even when it is raining as it is considered disrespectful to the warrior?
 * Reviewed: Not a self nom --Srikeit 06:15, 27 July 2011 (UTC)

Created by Tambeparag (talk). Nominated by Srikeit (talk) at 06:00, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Made during the Editing Sundays activity by the Campus Ambassadors in Pune --Srikeit 06:15, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
 * The hook is good but reads a bit awkwardly to me. I'd suggest rewording to the following:
 * ALT1: that when at Shinde Chhatri, a memorial to the warrior Mahadji Shinde, visitors cannot open their umbrellas even in rain, as it is considered disrespectful? r ʨ anaɢ (talk) 10:12, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
 * ALT1 sounds much better. Thanks! :) --Srikeit 15:35, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Now that I think of it, it might be even better without "a memorial to the warrior Mahadji Shinde]]"... loses some context, but makes the hook shorter, punchier, and it might be more likely that people click it to find out more. r ʨ anaɢ (talk) 01:57, 28 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Like ALT2: ... that when at Shinde Chhatri visitors cannot open their umbrellas even in rain?
 * Good idea. Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:47, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Symbol possible vote.svg Article currently has an expansion tag and there are some unreferenced sentences. Seems to be some close paraphrasing too. Otherwise, length and date check out. Hook fact is referenced.  Crisco 1492 (talk) 01:14, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Symbol delete vote.svg Issues not addressed in one week. Crisco 1492 (talk) 00:45, 16 August 2011 (UTC)