Template talk:Did you know/The Handley family of Sleaford

The Handley family of Sleaford

 * ... that two cousins, both called Benjamin Handley, were in a boat that capsized crossing the Tagus river during the Peninsular War—and one drowned while the other survived?
 * Comment: userspace draft, moved to mainspace 07 August 2011. Hook reference is in an offline source, but solid.

Created by ErrantX (talk). Self nom at 23:13, 7 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Pictogram voting keep.svg Timeliness of submission, length of article, and length of hook check out as OK. Offline citation AGF. OK for the queue. I played with the hook a bit, but it still seems awkward with some many dependent clauses in the sentence. (I got rid of one dependent clause that seems to have helped a bit.) - Tim1965 (talk) 00:30, 14 August 2011 (UTC)