Template talk:Did you know/Thelma Pressman

Thelma Pressman

 * ... that Thelma Pressman opened the first microwave cooking school in the United States?

Created/expanded by Yoninah (talk). Self nom at 20:10, 7 August 2011 (UTC)

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 * Length, format, content rules – --Antidiskriminator (talk) 13:36, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Source – --Antidiskriminator (talk) 13:36, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
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 * Length – --Antidiskriminator (talk) 13:34, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Vintage – --Antidiskriminator (talk) 13:34, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Sourcing (V, RS, BLP) – --Antidiskriminator (talk) 14:33, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Neutrality – --Antidiskriminator (talk) 14:33, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Plagiarism/close paraphrasing – --Antidiskriminator (talk) 14:15, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
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Comments/discussion:
 * I think that it might be better to add a year when this school was founded. Then it could look like:
 * ALT1: ... that in 1969 Thelma Pressman opened the first microwave cooking school in the United States? --Antidiskriminator (talk) 13:39, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * ALT1 is fine by me. Yoninah (talk) 20:24, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Just suggestion about possible close paraphrasing?: "to develop recipes, design cookware," might be close paraphrasing.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 14:15, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Fixed. Yoninah (talk) 20:24, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Symbol confirmed.svg --Antidiskriminator (talk) 14:33, 8 August 2011 (UTC)