Template talk:Did you know nominations/Shireen Abu Akleh

Original hook
Hi Thriley, the original hook is longer than expected. Per Did you know/Hook length it should be lower than 200 characters. You may try something like this:

* ...that Palestinian American journalist Shireen Abu Akleh was fatally shot despite wearing a blue vest with "PRESS" written on it while covering a raid by the Israel Defense Forces in the West Bank?

M h hossein  talk 06:14, 27 May 2022 (UTC)
 * I think it would be better if we keep on the discussions here; How is the following?


 * ...according to investigations by independent press agencies, journalist Shireen Abu Akleh (her death protest pictured) was killed by an Israel Defense Forces bullet while wearing a blue "PRESS" vest? -- M h hossein   talk 14:48, 8 July 2022 (UTC)
 * Sure.  nableezy  - 03:37, 14 July 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the reply @Nableezy, but I am afraid, does it mean you're happy with the hook?  M h hossein   talk 14:37, 14 July 2022 (UTC)
 * Yeah, thats fine with me.  nableezy  - 15:17, 14 July 2022 (UTC)