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Edit request from Octocfoc, 29 April 2010
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Look, i believe this document contains wrong and unuseful material. I know i could make this page better, just give me that chance. Thanks you so very much for taking the time to read this. Sincerely

Mr. Eisenbarth

Octocfoc (talk) 15:33, 29 April 2010 (UTC)


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 * Red question icon with gradient background.svg Not done: please be more specific about what needs to be changed. Avic enna sis  @ 16:18, 29 April 2010 (UTC)

Edit request from Asiaszeni, 30 April 2010
Christian Webersik [Climate change and security 2010]

Asiaszeni (talk) 13:15, 30 April 2010 (UTC)
 * Whatever request it is you're trying to make, this is not the place to do it. Algebraist 15:55, 30 April 2010 (UTC)

I don't have a wiki account, but I believe that the following sentence should be removed:

Passengers admitted fighting with the Israeli commandos but defended their actions by saying their ship was boarded by a military force in international waters.[18]

I don't know if the statement itself is true; however, source cited with this information does not have information corroborating this sentiment. Therefore it should either be removed fully, or [citation needed] should be added. Due to the nature of the sentiment of this sentence (which implies some blame for the passengers), I think it should be removed. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.208.52.23 (talk) 17:42, 5 June 2010 (UTC)

Edit request from Doug123h, 9 June 2010
Daniel Tosh hosts tosh.0 A show were a "Gitty Manchild" pokes fun at other socially ackward, sexually perverse, and miscellaneous misfits who decide to share their brillant videos via web.

Doug123h (talk) 22:31, 9 June 2010 (UTC)


 * Red information icon with gradient background.svg Not done: It's less than clear what you want to accomplish, but you are definitely on the wrong page. Favonian (talk) 22:47, 9 June 2010 (UTC)