User:"Stanley2025"/Neonatal intensive care unit/AmyRincor Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Stanely2025


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Neonatal intensive care unit

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you have great information that you can fit nicely into your current article. If you choose to start new sections just make sure there is enough information in those sections. If what you are adding is only a sentence or two i would try to just fit it in nicely to a preexisting paragraph or section.

Your addition to the lead is a little lengthy to be one sentence. Maybe try to break it up so it is easier to read. "The NICU is divided into several areas, including a critical care area for babies who require close monitoring and intervention, ( i would change the comma to a period and start a new sentence. ) an intermediate care area for infants who are stable but still require specialized care, and a step down unit where babies who are ready to leave the hospital can receive additional care before being discharged.


 * neutral content, no bias, all facts no opinions

everything else to me seems good I think if you can keep the flow when adding your new info.