User:"psithurism311"/Storyville, New Orleans/QuickPeanut Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I amm reviewing the work under the sandbox named psithurism311


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:"psithurism311"/Storyville, New Orleans


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:"psithurism311"/Storyville, New Orleans

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think violets should be violence. My group did our project differently. This seems to be the work of one person. We did one sandbox where we all put our work together. The content is great its all there and about the main topic. Tone, and balance is well done. It says what it has to say. There are some filler words, and they are not like crazy bias ones. The sources are so neat, and clean on this I am impressed, because I did not do that. Great job! I assume this is just the music section of the article, and your group mates are doing the other contributions?