User:$tudent22/Wellness check/Redlamp99 Peer Review

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 * Editing User:$tudent22/Wellness check - Wikipedia


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 * Wellness check - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Could be more organized by having headings with information underneath. All of the bullet points can be hard to read and lack of order can get confusing, but headings would be easy fix. There were only 2 total sources which were credible but there could have been a great variety. The way everything is written is neutral and informative and written very clearly. There really isn't any gray area of information. All information is relevant to the topic. There are not any images added. I am not very familiar with the subject so I can't suggest anything, but I do feel adding an image would be helpful. It isn't clear where the content in the sandbox would be added into the real article, but headings would help with that. Also, double check a couple spelling and grammar issues. Overall, good job. Just add more sources and make it a little more organized.