User:新乡职业技术学院王哥/China Eastern Airlines/Asassdaw Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

新乡职业技术学院王哥


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:%E6%96%B0%E4%B9%A1%E8%81%8C%E4%B8%9A%E6%8A%80%E6%9C%AF%E5%AD%A6%E9%99%A2%E7%8E%8B%E5%93%A5/China_Eastern_Airlines?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * China Eastern Airlines
 * China Eastern Airlines

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead:

This articles focuses more on the adding to the already existing context, it doesn't make much changes to the leading section of the article.

Content:

The context is very relevant to the articles as it talks about the companies' culture and its fleet size. In addition, all the source are from either professional websites or official websites, therefore the information is valid,

Tone and Balance:

The tone is very neutral as the articles is trying to tell an objective facts, such as the size of the fleet, therefore there are no room for unnatural tones. Even when they are talking about its corporate culture, it is taken reference from the official websites.

Source and Reference :

The source are all up to date and I've clicked to all its sources, and it still exists and one of the source is firm's official websites and the other is an professional websites which I think is valid.

Organization:

The articles is well-structured, it structure make reader can easily follow its leads.

Images and Media:

The article uses one images, and although it is hand draw, but it has match perfectly with the original one.