User:新乡职业技术学院王哥/China Eastern Airlines/Max Vestappen Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:%E6%96%B0%E4%B9%A1%E8%81%8C%E4%B8%9A%E6%8A%80%E6%9C%AF%E5%AD%A6%E9%99%A2%E7%8E%8B%E5%93%A5/China_Eastern_Airlines?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * China Eastern Airlines

Evaluate the drafted changes
He did a very great job to collect data for the company income and introduce the investors related to the company. The information is related to the article and brandly new to the original article. All the info he add was facts and presented data, so the context is very neutral. Information is from China Eastern Airline official website, so we can trust its authority. He also add a graph about organizational structure, which enhance the introduction about the organization.