User:新乡职业技术学院王哥/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

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 * Article title Nintendo
 * Article Evaluation: The reason I wanted to evaluate the Nintendo is I'm a huge fan of it. The games they produce are just amazing. So begin with the first part the content of the Wikipedia page of Nintendo. The history of Nintendo has been illustrate completely. Starting from as a card company in year of 1889 to creating Nintendo Switch. The important turning point of Nintendo has been illustrate such as the invention of gameboy. However, there are still some problems in the content part. In my opinion, the Wikipedia need to write about the high level hierarchy and the game producers in the Nintendo company. What I mean is to make a specific part to mention it. For example, the Wikipedia article even did not mention much about Miyamoto Shigeru - the person who lead to developed Mario, Donkey Kong, The Legend of Zelda, Metroid, and so on. In the article he was only covered by a few sentences. Furthermore, the article also did not mentioned the game that related to the Nintendo though it has create a video game part. In my opinion, the game of the Nintendo should be listed. For instance, write how much games created in legend of Zelda series, and so on.
 * The statements of the article are natural, the article has mentioned a lot of part including, history, product, marketing, company structure, branches, policy. The information in the article didn't need to be update. The article got 302 citations, and all links are working.
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 * Article title Shanghai
 * Article Evaluation: I have lived in Shanghai about 7 years, I think I may be can helped to evaluate the article. From the content part, it has include a lot of aspect in the article, including, Etymology, History, Geography, Cityscape, Economics, Demographics, Education and research, Transportation, Culture, Sport, Environment, Media, and International Relations. However, in the transportation part, it did not mentioned much about the metro in the Shanghai, such as the numbers of lines of the metro system in Shanghai since it is an important part in the Shanghai's transportation system. Also, It did not mention the area that the subway can covered. The article just post a graph of the metro networks in Shanghai which is difficult to understand and looking at it. Also, the article should including the more aspect of Shanghai's economics. Such as the introduction of primary industry in Shanghai.
 * The article's claims are natural, the all part mentioned in article did not have any bias. However, some of the information need to be update such as the GDP in recent years. The links of total 360 citations are working.
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 * Article title Jay Chou
 * Article Evaluation: He is my favorite music producer and singer in China, and I also have learned about some of the music production. Therefore, I wanted to evaluate this article in Wikipedia. First of all, there are some of the content missing. The wikipedia article did not cover his all album and songs. In the article, it only mentioned his path of music in 2000 to 2005 and some singles released during 2018 to 2020. During 2006 to 2016, Jay Chou has also published 8 albums which are 依然范特西，“我很忙”，“魔杰座”，“惊叹号”，“十二新作”，“哎呦，不错哦”，“周杰伦的床边故事”, and also several singles. Nevertheless, it still has provide a lot of information of Jay Chou such as his music styles, the Chinese culture element, and so on.
 * The article's statements are natural. But it still required to be update. The new album of Jay Chou has been published on 2022-07-15-Greatest Work of art (最伟大的作品), and the Wikipedia article did not mentioned any information about it. Some of the Citations are not working, it also should be updated.
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