User:青巷忧颜/Evaluate an Article

Evaluate Pseudo-athlete article
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 * Name of article: Pseudo-athlete
 * The article's topic was closely related to the courses subject matter. ==

Content
==   The content under Pseudo-Athlete of Delos can be more complete. For example, since the intention of the patron is essential in studying Roman Art, it is better to include information like why did the Roman businessman choose to have it at his house. Content evaluation: ==

Sources and References
==   The Introduction needs more citation. For example, the quote "One of the potential origins of the veristic style is from Roman funeral masks." should be cited since it is an idea or "potential scholarly theory." Now the introduction paragraph feels a little bit subjective. The rest is good(the reference are peer-reviewed articles). ==

Organization
==   The article is well organized in terms of first introducing what is "pseudo-athlete," and then shares two examples. However, since Pseudo-Athlete of Delos is a famous object, it might be a little confusing for someone who wants to check the information about that particular artwork. Maybe separate the two passages into two articles? ==