User:0.25cm/Maxwell–Boltzmann statistics/Ajp256 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

0.25cm


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:0.25cm/Maxwell%E2%80%93Boltzmann_statistics?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Maxwell–Boltzmann statistics

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead feels like it should not have the equation with all of the variables listed out, and maybe that could be moved as the first section of the body and instead expand a little bit about Maxwell-Boltzmann statistics in the lead or summarize the what the equation physically means in words.

You seem to want to work on the applicability section, which I think does need work. There are no sources and it focuses entirely on the assumptions and results of using Maxwell-Boltzmann and only very briefly on "the limit of high temperature and low particle density" as described in the lead. Maybe this last part could be expanded upon to give the reader a better idea of why this is applicable or how it is useful.

The derivations are definitely too long and too technical, especially the one from microcanonical ensemble. There is also a distinct lack of sources there, so perhaps if you would like to work on those you can look at reference [1] or search for other references to see if there is any way to shorten or make them more casually approachable.

There is only one reference, so more would be welcome.