User:02jtroxel/Jean Tijou/Epbaldwin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

02jtroxel


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:02jtroxel/Jean_Tijou?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Jean Tijou

Evaluate the drafted changes
The sources you've added seem up to date and legitimate, and overall I think you've done a good job. There are a few places where I would change the phrasing to sound more neutral and concise, like with "Not only did he work for royal destinations, but he also worked for estates and other private homes located on the countryside" and " The Iron work of Tijou even influences the entrance gates that are seen at Chirk Castle located near Llangollen (1719)" by getting rid of words and phrases like "not only" and "even"