User:04noodle/Boomerang effect (psychology)/Franklyn101 Peer Review

good job

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

04noodle


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:04noodle/Boomerang_effect_%28psychology%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Boomerang effect (psychology)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like how you started off by including more recent data and studies that have been done recently, that is interesting and little more understandable given the theory. Although the study you mentioned was interesting and I liked how it talked about celebrities and real issues in the world today, I have a couple of questions. First you mentioned that the action led to an increase in stigma and depression romanticizing from the young audience and I was wondering, why there was an increase if the celebrities were speaking positively about it? Also you mentioned that both of which are consequential responses to the public health campaign and I was wandering why? Maybe you could elaborate more on the reasoning. Overall, great job and nice examples!