User:04noodle/Boomerang effect (psychology)/Mrkite412 Peer Review

Hello. While reviewing your article I was surprised to see how much information was included and felt that it was well put together. The structure and order of your page seems to match up to Wikipedia guidelines and presents the information in a clear manor. One aspect of your article that stuck out to me as something that might need tweaking was the section titled “Cognitive dissonance theory analysis”. I think that this section is significantly larger than the others in your article and could be brought down in length.

The only other suggestion I could come up with for your article involves the section titled “Deliberate exploitation”. Unlike my previous suggestion, I would recommend adding some more information to this section and expand on your example.

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