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Activity 1 tut 3:

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Luna_15&diff=888293111&oldid=864064680

Activity 2:

Considering the wikipedia page on ‘Apple’, first created on the 24th October 2001, there are many factors that could be improved. The most evident aspects are the layout and structure.


 * The structure of the paragraphs should be separated accordingly to disseminate a particular theme. This should be a minimum of four sentences.
 * Subheadings would be useful in categorising particular ideas.
 * When it comes to the content, additional information on the description of apples, their nativity, production and propagation, would be helpful.

In consideration as an editor, there are things that would require some improvements.


 * In terms of research, relevant and reliable sources should be included and properly referenced according to Wikipedia’s referencing format.

- Use of passive language should be avoided, such as “apple was probably a tree…”

- Scientific name should be properly referenced, and abbreviations should be referred to in brackets, i.e. “Researchers are working with M. sieversii…”

- Unsupported claims should be avoided as well, such as, “The assumption that the fruit that Adam and Eve ate was an apple can probably be attributed to its portrayal in artistic renderings of the fall from Eden.”