User:0diego0/The Memphis Horns/Vebrown Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

odiegoo


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:0diego0/The Memphis Horns


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Memphis Horns

Evaluate the drafted changes
So before I continue to review your article I would like to say I completely understand some of the notes are notes to yourself, so I am not going to mention any of them but just makes sure to get rid of all of them before you submit the final draft.

Lead


 * I think the lead is really good and shows a nice quick explanation of your topic

Content


 * I think each section has some good information about each section and I think the sections you have are good.
 * I do think you should transfer the table format from the original article.

Sources


 * I think you need more sources for your article, possible transfer some of the sources from the original article.

Overall Impressions


 * I think your article is really good! I think the biggest thing is to do some small changes and especially work on the sources part.