User:1013-Lisa/archive

My Project
Project changed to Itasca State Park, in collaboration with User:1013-Marty. See this archived page for a record of discussion about the previous topic.

Workshop: Itasca State Park
Lisa and Marty are collaborating on this article, so this will be an eight-person workshop combining Groups 2 and 4.

Headquarters for the workshop is on Marty's talk page. Please join the discussion there.

Hi, I've nominated an article you worked on, Itasca State Park, for consideration to appear on the Main Page as part of Did you know. You can see the "hook" for the article at Template talk:Did you know where you can improve it if you see fit. 1013-josh 22:12, 30 April 2007 (UTC)

You're on the Main Page!

Hi Marty & Lisa, your article was featured on the Main Page of Wikipedia in the "Did You Know?" fact box for 6+ hours this morning. You may have had some strangers stopping by your article as a result, so check the page history. 1013-josh 17:35, 3 May 2007 (UTC)

moved Brendan's comment to User talk:1013-Marty

Participation: Lisa
I added more information to the "History of Arctic Haze" section in Shae's article.1013-Lisa 17:02, 2 May 2007 (UTC)

I extended the introduction by 65 words and added the source I used to the references. Also, I fixed her other 2 sources to fit the correct MLA style citation and alphabetized them. 1013-Lisa 00:16, 4 May 2007 (UTC)

Added a footnote in Shae's article. 1013-Lisa 00:39, 4 May 2007 (UTC)

I wrote a paragraph in Shae's workshop section explaining what I thought worked well in the paper, suggestions for revisions, and gave her a heads up to check the history of her page to see my revisions. 1013-Lisa 05:59, 4 May 2007 (UTC)

In Loree's article, I made substantial grammar corrections throughout the entire thing, undid some wikilinks that didn't actually have a page, reworded sentences, etc. There were quite a few mistakes in this aspect of the paper. 1013-Lisa 05:59, 4 May 2007 (UTC)

I wrote a paragraph in Loree's workshop section explaining what I found as strong points in her paper and gave her a lot of feedback on what to revise before she turns it in. 1013-Lisa 06:18, 4 May 2007 (UTC)

In Brendan's article, I made grammatical corrections, reworded some sentences, undid inactive wikilinks, and tweaked the references section a bit. 1013-Lisa 07:02, 4 May 2007 (UTC)

I wrote a paragraph in Brendan's workshop section pointing out his strengths/weaknesses of the paper, my thoughts on where it could improve, addressed the possibility of plagiarism, etc. 1013-Lisa 07:03, 4 May 2007 (UTC)

Homework
I'm done with assignment #1!1013-Lisa 04:47, 16 April 2007 (UTC)

Finished Wednesday's homework 1013-Lisa 07:01, 18 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Good work. I liked that you remembered to add a comment to the edit summary box to make it easier for other users to follow your changes. You may want to add the film page to your watchlist so you can see what becomes of your changes. 1013-josh 07:04, 18 April 2007 (UTC)

Friday's homework: I give my consent for this project. 1013-Lisa 16:36, 20 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Okay, great! Let me know at any time if you change your mind and would like to switch to an off-line research assignment. 1013-josh 18:29, 20 April 2007 (UTC)

Done with Monday's homework: Working Draft (P.S.- I changed my topic) 1013-Lisa 04:26, 23 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Okay, your research looks great. Let me know how it goes with the joint project. I'll expect 1500+ words from you two on Friday, and a final draft of 2500-3000 words. Let me know how it's going and which project draft page you will be working at. 1013-josh 19:30, 23 April 2007 (UTC)

Done with homework. Project Draft Page 1013-Lisa 13:51, 27 April 2007 (UTC)


 * Good work. I think you're ready to transfer over to the mainspace. I prepped your draft for the move -- combining the two sections and adding images and categories from the stub article -- and I'll help you copy it over in class. 1013-josh 14:58, 27 April 2007 (UTC)

Hey Josh, is it alright if I print my reflective essay in blue (probably a darker blue)?? My black ink cartridge just ran out and I don't have a new one on hand. p.s. sorry if this shows up twice, I wasn't logged in. 1013-Lisa 23:30, 8 May 2007 (UTC)


 * sure 1013-josh 02:34, 9 May 2007 (UTC)

Marty and I are finished with our final revisions! Hope you like it :) 1013-Lisa 13:37, 10 May 2007 (UTC)

Notes from Josh & the Class
Hey, I just posted some helpful research links; don't miss them! 1013-josh 21:32, 18 April 2007 (UTC)

Notes from Wikipedians
Wikipedians, if you're commenting specifically about the Itasca State Park article, feel free to chime in in the "Workshop" section at User talk:1013-Marty.

Welcome
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I've moved your draft from User:1013-Lisa to User:1013-Lisa/draft per your teacher's project design. Again, welcome! --Geniac 18:25, 23 April 2007 (UTC)