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Emotional Eating

The article I chose is "emotional eating," which could really use a lot of editing. There is a pop-up when visiting the page that asks for revisions because the article is written like a personal story with opinions and personal feelings-I'm really excited to work with this article since there is a lot of room for me to add. A lot of the things in the article aren't cited-there are only about 13 references total. The biggest thing that needs work is the definition for "emotional eating" which isn't cited at all. It also makes claims that emotional eating can lead to eating disorders, but there is no reference to back this up. It seems like all the headings make sense for the topic, but there just needs to be more general information that is referenced. I don't think there is any bias, it just seems like a lot of the information doesn't come from references. A lot of the references also are from primary sources rather than reviews, so that will be a challenge; the links for the references do work. I didn't notice any plagiarism or close paraphrasing. Overall, I get to have a lot of fun with this article, and I might have a good chance of what I add being published in the article.