User:10Adrian/The Rhetorical Presidency/Ccgx29 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am reviewing 10Adrian's work for the The Rhetorical Presidency page.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://dashboard.wikiedu.org/courses/University_of_Denver/Introduction_to_Political_Communication_(Winter_2023)/students/articles/Ccgx29?showArticle=42122506


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Rhetorical Presidency

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a strong start in improving this page. Starting the history with the first president, William McKinley is a good way. With this you can continue with this tactics of how he is related to the Rhetorical Presidency - such as his personality, examples throughout his term, etc. Also a picture of McKinley can give users more insight of who he is and an image of the theory may look on a president (it can be significant events).

Because you started with the first president, you can continue on this pattern with other presidents after him. Using the first source from the reference list, it can be helpful to skim through the multiple presidents where this theory presents. Don't be scared to go more in depth.

Another source you can use it "The Rhetorical Presidency" Today: How Does it Stand Up?. This journal article is by Mel Larceny, who is a professor of Political Science at the University of Texas. It can show the history of Rhetorical Presidency and the development of 'The New Way'.

'''R: Thanks for the source, I will greatly consider using it. I didn't put any of the McKinley stuff in there but we will definitely add more information about more recent presidents. Thanks for the feedback.'''

'''A: I think we got the source already, but yeah I haven't used it that much. So thanks for the feedback on it. I'm also planning to add more presidents that are relevant. I'll also add some relevant pictures to keep the users interested.'''