User:123-se/Product marketing/Savmanbanans Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
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The article is concise overall but could include a lot more helpful information as well as more specific section titles and additional sections outlining education for this field, real world applications, and references to companies that involve product marketing. The "Roles" and "Qualifications" section are useful but could have more precise examples as this is a very broad job field. More references would also be helpful.

Lead:

Some repetition in lead. Lead can also include an outline of later sections in the article once more depth and specification is added.

Body:

I think the edits to the Qualifications section is helpful and nicely expands the ideas there. Footnote #5 can definitely be brought in more to the sentence it is reference in.

The direction the edits are taking the article is positive and I can see potential in the further research being done. Overall, there is a lot to add to this article and the edits made so far show good progress.