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Improving Article on Sow-Hsin Chen
Greetings. I am a new contributor to Wikipedia, and I found your name listed on the Editor Assistance page.

I submitted an article on Sow-Hsin Chen after making changes based on user page feedback from a reviewer, and it was marked with peacock and puffery tags and graded C. I really want my contribution to be of the highest possible quality for Wikipedia, and am looking for specific editorial advice on what changes to make in order to facilitate tag removal and advance the article to a GA.

Thanks in advance for your consideration and tolerance, and I hope that you will be able to advise me.

Best, Rubinm (talk) 16:41, 12 December 2011 (UTC)