User:123dq/Minister of Pensions and National Health (Canada)/Ashven20 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

123dq


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:123dq/Minister_of_Pensions_and_National_Health_%28Canada%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Minister of Pensions and National Health (Canada)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I believe the article of body should look different. Im not sure that part sounds reasonable because it's a lot of claims being said. It doesn't really make a lot of sense. I can see you started thinking of edits but didn't really make any.