User:123dq/Minister of Pensions and National Health (Canada)/ELL0915 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

123dq


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:123dq/Minister of Pensions and National Health (Canada)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Minister of Pensions and National Health (Canada)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that you had a good start on your article. i think maybe find something in your research that is more specific to the topic and make a mini article about that and it could elevate your response. Overall, you had a good starting point with the work you have done so far!