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Evaluating: History of Fashion Design

This article is structured very well. It has a clear summary at the beginning and then goes through different sections of history in subtitles. There are also many problems with this article. It relies on only one source for all it's information. It is also written like a personal reflection or opinion essay. There is bias in this article which needs to be taken out. The article does have a lot of coverage. It has a lot of information starting from before 1900 when fashion began, up until 1990s. This article could also be improved by adding information on fashion after the 1990s and in modern day.

After reading the talk page, I found many similarities and more things that could be changed this article. Many also say the article needs to be less biased and that it heavily relies on only one source for information. Many also say that the article is mainly about just western fashion, it needs more citations, and that the introduction and article as a whole are too long. I agree with these comments and believe theres is a lot that could be done to improve this article. Many also suggest renaming the article to "History of Western Fashion since 1990" to be more clear what the article is really about.