User:1326mmb/Chokwe people/Nelso4Bj Peer Review

The additions provide additional historical context for the society, and the new sections are concise and add a lot of new information about the society. The only thing that seems to be missing are examples of features of construction techniques that identify the mask as from this society/masquerade specifically, such as what the masks are made of, or decorated with.

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