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= Selecting Possible Articles = Sector: Health Leads; Social determinants of health; Social determinants of health in poverty

Area: San Pablo, California; Contra Costa County, California

= Evaluating two articles = Sector: Health Leads

The article is for the most part relevant to the topic and of the appropriate tone. However, while the founder was/is heavily involved in the project, much of the article seems to be focused on her, instead of the organization. For example, one line in the article states "The Schwab Foundation for Social Entrepreneurship named Onie one of twenty-four international Social Entrepreneurs of the Year 2013. The award recognizes leadership and innovation, as well as potential for global impact". This is only somewhat relevant, and should be instead placed in either the founder's page, or under another section focused on her. As this is the organization I am working with, learning more about the organization is extremely important. While I had thought that I knew enough about the organization, I realized that I did not know about HealthLeads's funding, and its reach.

For citations, most of the links are active, however, the article uses many sources from the organization's own website. While this is appropriate to a degree, it is good to keep in mind that some of the information does come from a very unbiased source. In addition, much of the information is out of date, and have not been recently updated (the organization does recruit from UC Berkeley, but does not mention this). The article is also missing many important links to the main social issues it is hoping to help with, or details about impact. Lastly, the article's talk page is rather empty.

Area: San Pablo, California

The article is clearly focused on the encyclopedia aspect of the city and lists out its history, demographics, geography, etc. This is appropriate for Wikipedia, as it is a small town, it does not have many famous and Wikipedia entries. However, the article does not at all explain any of the things that make the town unique, or any issues that the town is facing with. The page lacks in detail about recent significant events, and the notable people section seems both underpopulated and unnecessary. As the physical location of my PE is in San Pablo, it is important for me to better understand the individuals with whom I will be working with, as well as the state of the town's available services.

For citations, most of the links are active. No viewpoint really dominates another, as the entire article is only focused on bare facts (many of which come from the US censusthe ), with nothing about culture, controversies, culture, etc. The project is part of two WikiProjects: California and United States - both of which list the page as "C" status - it is significantly lacking in material.