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Education portion of the Wikipedia article, "Refugee."

Could possibly make it a "Youth" or "Children" heading and talk about education under that. The reader is lead to believe that the writer thinks refugee children are struggling and treated unfairly. However, he includes factual information for the most part. The statistics are helpful, as well as the example of the actions that schools are taking to confront this issue. The links to the citations work and they appear to come from trustworthy journals and reviews. They support the information that the writer is talking about. Facts are well referenced throughout the article. Some more about the refugee youth's general life could be added and if the students are able to succeed despite the obstacles. There is nothing on the talk page regarding the "Education" part of the article.