User:18bhong/Queen Hyojeong/Icela01 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

18bhong


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Queen Hyojeong
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Something I would include is the place of birth and death in the introduction.


 * Overall, good job and I like how you structured it. It is well written and very few grammatical mistakes.
 * You should add more information of the queen Hyoeong and not focus so much in her family members.
 * I liked how you kept everything neutral and didn't involve you're personal opinion.
 * Including more citations and references of where the information was obtained.
 * The article is more complete but could still add more information about the queen
 * could add information like how their family is part of the royalty and how it works.
 * The article does have links to other articles of other individuals that were part of her life.
 * Including these links makes it helpful to see the background information of the queen and the ones who helped her.
 * It has two but could add more references and context about her life.
 * If you can find a picture of the queen, you should add it so we could see how she looked like.
 * For the picture posted add a bit more context so we could understand what you are demonstrating to us.
 * All the links included work!
 * Overall, great job and keep up the structure and the neutral tone you have created.