User:18roo/Lateralization of brain function/ThunderhillMc Peer Review

General info
User: 18roo
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:18roo/Lateralization of brain function - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lateralization of brain function - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article "Lateralization of Brain Function" does not yet have a lead. When the group gets time based off of the rest of the article I am sure they will have a strong lead. In the article body it begins with the Lateralized functions and language. This is separate from the article body, and does not carry any further explanation of what is going on so I think that could be left out of the article when complete. Within the body there are some points where the author uses "we". Avoid using "we". Using "we" in a sentence when trying to explain something from a neutral perspective takes away from the credibility and make it more of an opinion.