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Article analysis
Lead: I think the lead has good information but it could improve with how the information is presented.

Sections: I thought these were pretty good. They are short but some of them do have a good amount for how long they are. The end is biased

Information: It is good and

Balance: I know it is biased and I want to fix that. Maybe not delete it but it will maybe add some more sections

The thing I would like to work on is how the information is presented in the lead since the information is good but it gets a little lost at the end. I would try and make it less biased. I think the legal part is important but it seems a little biased and would like to include how it has impacted society (music) and us as humans.