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Article Evaluation
The Storm

I think it would be insightful if they mentioned the way the story is broken into sections. This could be included with the plot summary or discussed more in depth within the analysis section. This is a large part of the story but is not mentioned anywhere in the Wikipedia article.

In the symbolism section, it could be added that they use the white imagery for Calixta during the affair but do not really describe Alcee at all. The focus remains on Calixta and the weather outside.

Another symbol that could be added would be the wild and natural comparisons made towards Calixta. The narrator compares her to a dove and also uses the word creature to describe her. These are useful examples of symbolism in this story that are completely ignored.

To Build A Fire

A section could be added to discuss the man's relationship with the dog. This is a central part of the story. It helps to demonstrate the man's personality to the reader.

Although it was mentioned that the protagonist is unnamed, it could describe how this affects the story. By leaving the main character unnamed, readers are less likely to feel grief when he dies. Also, it limits the ability to form any personal connections with the character.

I think another section should be added on how London writes in a way that portrays the man as an unlikeable character, based on the mans actions and elements within the story.

Paul's Case

I think that there should be another section emphasizing the effects of losing a mother. Clearly Paul is troubled and a lot of that could be from the emotional effects he feels from his loss.