User:19Hazel/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Food desert

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose this because it relates to my course on environment and justice. It's important because it effects the health of communities living in food deserts. When I first looked at the page it seemed like there were information of subjects within the topic.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

There are areas within the article that can be expanded more. Some information could have also fit better in different area than where it was placed. there weren't that many images on the page. There is a lot of information about studies regarding the topic and not so much about the topic itself making the tone sound kinda neutral.