User:19alice2000/Asylum in the United States/Alisha2003 Peer Review

General info
19alice2000
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Asylum in the United States draft
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Asylum in the United States
 * Asylum in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I do not see anything on your sandbox draft yet. If you need help starting, I suggest going through your Needs Talk essay and seeing what information you can add from there onto your article.