User:200254891mg/Evaluate an Article

The article that I read focused on a listing of sexuality related phobias. The only thing that I found distracting was the use of the word, "love" rather than a more formal use of "sex." This word choice was distracting because I do find the words to have two vastly different meanings regardless of their connotations. None of the information was out of date, but a robust amount of information could be brought on to further explain the list as well as to describe times that people have acted out of biphobia, transphobia, and so on, and how it effects people of those sexual orientations. I think the article could also be improved by removing it from the "sexual emotions" category. An extreme fear that is nested in hate and the feeling of fear itself appear as different concepts in my mind. Overall, the article is rather neutral, providing basic definitions and not much information further. I believe that the viewpoints are represented rather equally in this way. There actually are no citations, which proves that this article does need updating even for basic definitions. Merriam Webster would qualify as a non-bias source I believe. Conversations on sexuality, sexology, and psychology are all listed which I think can positively impact the article to focus more thoroughly on the effects that the listed phobia have on impacted communities. The article has not received any reviews, but it is on the WikiProject Lists page. This project works to structure and organize all list pages.