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Article Evaluation
Tap Dance:

To start off, this page contains a list of references. I clicked through some of the citations, and not all of them take me to any type of website. Its sources remain unclear and could be improved by introducing more precise citations. I also feel as though it lacks information about modern day choreographers, events, techniques, styles, etc. It was requested by someone on the talk page that a video clip would be helpful to improve this article. I totally agree with that. It would definitely help readers to understand what this style of dance looks like and how it sounds. I do, however, think this article does a nice job of describing certain aspects in detail.

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The Seven Descents of Myrtle:

This page does not contain a cast list which is helpful when doing quick research on the play. It also lacks a summary of the ending of a play. I will add these things.

I added a comma and the word "closeted" to an existing sentence. Otherwise grammar seems correct.