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Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title: Kendama
 * Article Evaluation:
 * - Not all claims have citations
 * - Some sources are not reliable
 * - Random information
 * - Sub-par phrasing
 * - General lack of information in most sub-categories
 * Potential Improvements
 * (can't undo bold and underline?)
 * - Update rules section: describe different types of competition, official rules for each competition
 * - What it means to be sponsored/pro benefits
 * - Update descriptions of competitions
 * - Lengthen lead in....facts about kendama's linkage to bilboquet
 * - Robot section can be elaborated on https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0893608096000433
 * - ADD A "TRICKS" SECTION!
 * https://www.jstage.jst.go.jp/article/jje1965/40/Supplement/40_Supplement_30/_pdf/-char/ja
 * http://kendamausa.com/kendama-tricks-and-tutorials/
 * Sources
 * https://sweetskendamas.com/pages/what-is-kendama
 * - Elaborate on effects of kendama
 * - Details of kendama
 * - Elaborate on effects of kendama
 * - Details of kendama

https://jpninfo.com/11435

- In-depth history of kendama origin

https://kendama.co.uk/history.html

- history of kendama

https://kendama.co.uk/anatomy.html

- Parts of a kendama

Option 2

 * Article title: Koa Coffee Plantation
 * Article Evaluation:
 * - No subcategories, the article is just one long lead-in
 * - Lack of citations
 * - Needs way more organized information
 * - Absence of balanced content
 * Sources
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Option 3

 * Article title: King-Co Athletic Conference
 * Article Evaluation
 * - Extremely short lead in, not enough detail
 * - Under developed reference section
 * - Out of date data
 * - Lack of information, hardly any subcategories, unbalanced data
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Option 5

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