User:20Monica02/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Healthy community design

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
As someone who specializes in the intersection of society and health, I wanted to see how I could contribute to this page as well as learn more from other wiki peeople

Evaluate the article
Lead Section


 * Easy to read, concise
 * the last bullet point could be a bit more detailed and there is come ambiguity

Content


 * Could use some concrete examples of it employed
 * Only one section, should branch to more
 * possible talk about stakeholders involved

Tone + Balance


 * Neutral overall

Sources / References


 * Good starting points, would be nice to go over more some of the examples they gave

Organization and writing quality


 * Good but the overal content feels a bit vague, needs more concrete structure

More images or flow diagrams of the content would be easier to understand the concept.

Great start, but still needs concrete work