User:21mgs/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
British White cattle - Wikipedia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I have a very strong interest in beef cattle. I had never heard of this breed of cattle before, which is very unusual for me, so I wanted to learn more about this breed.

Evaluate the article
This article starts off with an informative opening statement about the article as a general thought. It doesn't hit all of the major sections though. The lead is very concise and to the point.

The information is all very relevant to the article as well as current. At the end of the article, the author writes about similar breeds of cattle to the British White breed. They stray a bit far from things that should be similarities in breeds, not just coloring.

The article is very neutral. There are no controversial points made in the article and is totally factual. I wouldn't say that there are any minorities or even bias present. There also is no persuasion to anything.

The author backs up their claims with reliable sources of information throughout the article. Some of the sources are a bit older, but most of it is up to date. Even after checking a few source links, they do indeed work and route to more secondary information.

The article in general is very well written. There are some grammar errors, but I only found very few. It also is well organized. The author breaks it up into very strict sections of information, like characteristics and history. It is very easy to read and understand since they also go into detail explaining certain vocabulary. As for images, there are only two. The one is a close up of a cow's head while the other is a whole-body picture. It might have been nice to use a picture of the red pointed cattle since they mentioned it so often as an alternative color.