User:22aneumann/Social movement theory/Abbyhallam003 Peer Review

General info
EmariDoby
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:22aneumann/Social movement theory/Bibliography:User:22aneumann/Social movement theory
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Social movement theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
- My first edit would be to add this source attached and cited as it related to social movement communication. This is an important aspect of the social movement theory and could be significant to add in the original article. This is interesting especially because of the mentions as it related to the LBTQIA which is an important aspect to add.

- My second edit is related to Emari's sandbox draft. Where it is mentioned to add information about "structuralist and constructivist approaches through communication is that constructivism focuses on more communication." This article attached will be helpful I think to be able to pull from. In the article mentions about conceptualizing social movements and the communication within which I think is important to add when wanting to make that edit found in the sandbox. Thank you for this suggestion Abby, this is greatly appreciated.