User:22aneumann/Social movement theory/Emendelman Peer Review

General info
22aneumann, Jordin Letchinger, Emaridoby
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:22aneumann/Social movement theory
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Social movement theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
thank you for your input. I will make sure add some more sources. Thank you so much for the feedback, this is greatly appreciated.
 * 1) I think that there is a possibility of missing out on some opportunities to add sources in some sections of the article to gain some easy edits if you so desired them, such as in the Contemporary Approaches section (Emari, I think what you have in your plan is really helpful and a valuable contribution; make sure you insert sources :)! )
 * 2) I would recommend moving sources for definitions to the end of the statement (for example, the source being cited at the beginning of anomie may end up getting moved but who's to say!)