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Article Evaluation of "Natural building"

Evaluating content -nothing off topic

-Some awkward sentences, 2nd sentence is an example. Some revision of wording and tying thoughts together could be used for the entire article

-Could use more pictures of what the products look like and even the construction process to make it.

-Compare the building materials (strength, insulation properties, durability, abundance, etc) to typically used construction materials today like concrete and steel if that can be found (good example of this was with the straw bales and talking about the mechanical property that it can hold up to 4000plf)

- Give an idea where these materials are better suited. For example: climates where it would work efficiently (did a good job when with this when talking about insulation, but more specific things would be appreciated), how durable the materials are in certain climates, limitations to the material's mechanical properties, how different variations of the material affect the effectiveness of the material (i.e. a place with more granite or different types of wood), how materials could be manipulated to serve different areas (like colder or wetter places), and other things like that (this would take considerably more research, but it would make the page quite reliable and a good reference to those wishing to learn more about sustainable natural building materials)

Evaluating tone -It seems to be a bit biased by promoting the materials and putting them in a good light but not really comparing them to other things. If there was a better comparison to more common building materials or even the other materials talked about, it would provide a better understanding and neutral view of the article

Evaluating sources -Sources are books and some other articles that look credible and lead to more information which is a big plus to lead people to learn more and add to the article though those sources

-They might be slightly biased towards their product but I'm sure more reading would probably show a more neutral light

Talk page -The talk page doesn't have much going on with it, just slight changes with wording and slight content change

-I found this in the C-Class articles -overall a great start and foundation for the article to begin but there could be much much more to add and to make it more of a "one-stop-shop" for someone looking for info about this topic