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= Article Evaluation = The introduction seems to be straightforward but misses a few components while also sounding a bit redundant. The writer does not mention what type of gang the Asian Boyz are considered along with the fact that they contain military trained members. The fact that they are military trained creates an idea regarding their behavior and habits.

I think they did an excellent job going into depth regarding the history behind the gang along with the crimes committed. The only thing that needs to be changed is the introduction because it seems rather rushed with facts.

If I could improve this article, I'd set an idealistic image. I would establish the seriousness behind this gang by mentioning how they are military trained. Along with the fact that they are a street gang because there are many types of gangs. It is important to address because mentioning what gang they are apart of gives you an understanding of their duties.

They have most of their statements cited but there's a sources needed for the first paragraph, last sentence.