User:27manpreet/Big River First Nation/Aguakatee Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am peer reviewing 27manpreet article Big River First Nation.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:27manpreet/Big_River_First_Nation?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Big River First Nation

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has a concise sentence regarding the explanation and break down of what the Big River First Nation. There are many sections that I think will be very interesting once they are discussed in depth. The content that they have so far seems to be in a neutral tone, but requires further expansion on the topics. They mention the history of the word Canada and how it could have possibly come from a Cree Nation word, I would love to see more expansion on that. So far there has not been any media published, but I think in the original article there is some media that has been published. The sources used seem to be reliable because they are cbc links, and once of them seems to be very current because it is from last year. I think there needs to be more sources because not every section is backed up with something, and some of them just seem to be news articles. I think this article will add a lot of strong sections to the original article for example; the literacy section and the programs and activism section will add details of the Big River Nation that not many people know about. Overall its a good layout of what the article will contain, just needs to be expanded on more.