User:2cool4school99/Alitta succinea/Ap27173 Peer Review

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"This allows us to know that Alitta succinea has the ability to live in very different areas worldwide": I would rephrase this sentence, the wording explains the idea in a very roundabout way and the wording is a bit awkward.

The first sentence in the ecology section referencing citation 4 has awkward wording.

The reproduction section discussing schizogamy and epigamy has several syntax errors and incomplete sentences; the second paragraph of the reproduction section also has several syntax errors, typos, and incomplete sentences

Overall, this article is very detailed and contains good amounts of information in all sections. The only thing really holding this article back is the lack of proofreading that lead to lots of syntax errors and typos not being found in the final draft.